It is a lovely name, ( she informs him, earnestly, her eyes huge with the importance of what she says. does he know that he has a lovely name? it is very important that he understand. its syllables run together pleasingly, the z and the v giving it an appealing verbal edge. she may have only a vague notion of his face, come morning, but certainly she still shall have his name. )
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Pleasingly written. It is a good choice. I think.